It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down. To what extent do you agree to disagree?
There is no doubt that getting married before completing the study is one of the most hectic phenomena in every modern society, affecting people in all walks of life considerably. However, whether it is a foolish idea or not has sparked controversy among people recently. I am, to a significant extent, in favor of the former standpoint. In the ensuing paragraphs, I will try to shed light on my perspective through ample examples and compelling reasons.
From a psychological point of view, marriage is indeed bound to the stressful lifestyle, which means it might lead to both financial and educational problems. As a tangible example, a group of eminent psychologists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between a happy marriage and studying at the same time. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that undertaking responsibilities before graduation is correlated positively with depression.
In economic terms, marriage before graduation is undoubtedly attributable to financial difficulty, in that it would lead to too much bill, debts, and loans to pay. A well-known example of such attributions is higher education, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take economic planning for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint moneymaking problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of education in better career opportunities.
To conclude, after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the negative consequences of the marriage before finishing the study are of more significance. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54385964912 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28593447031 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 139.433497537 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659649122807 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1413184112 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149396976699 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427731054117 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509501214092 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080485645639 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051044854409 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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