It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down. To what extent do you agree to disagree?

Recently, the phenomenon of modern inventions has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question about getting married before studies and setting down. Whereas, it I widely held view that getting married before studies and secured future is not worthwhile, therefore, I completely disagree with the notion. That’s why I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout the essay.

Firstly, from the marital standpoint, emotional issues are bound up inextricably with early marriage, which indicates they lead to stressful lifestyle, marital breakdown and disputed relationships. As well known example, a longitudinal study conducted by the group of eminent scientists in year 2014 demonstrates the relationship between personal attitude successful marriages as well as the consequences of conflicts in the relationships. Researchers, nevertheless, paid heed to the drawbacks of a practical lifestyle and other fundamental aspects in a married life

Secondly, in the modern era, there are irrefutable problems to survive a better life; one major factor is the financial needs. I am inclined to believe that poverty is gradually increasing today, and in many regions people are living their life by primitive ways, which impacts a lot on their thoughts.

To conclude, there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the drawback of early marriage is outweighing the advantages. It is not only about the pros and cons but basic needs and surviving myopia. Therefore, I strongly recommend not to believe in early marriage and you’re your decisions accordingly.

Votes
Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68292682927 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17899694055 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650406504065 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9369484871 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.25397266985 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129804245906 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459401361445 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699607644423 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069638839142 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889598655244 0.0609392437508 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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