It is important for children to study a film at school to learn literature. To what extent you agree? Give example.
Co-curricular activities are equally important for children as are academic studies. Some people think that children must be encouraged to participate in co-curricular activities like arts, music , and sports, while others maintain that academic studies are more important than participation in other activities. This essay will discuss the importance of co-curricular activities for students.
Firstly, there are myriad benefits of participating in arts, music, and sports. To begin with, a healthy mind and a physical fit child can only excel and grow in his life. Therefore, participation in sports boosts the physical health condition of a student and develops skills like sportsmanship that cannot be taught through academic courses. Moreover, participating in arts and music allows students to explore their hidden talents and ease out their academic tensions. Hence, the importance of participation in co-curricular activities cannot be overruled.
Furthermore, the exposure provided to the students by arts and music allows them to have a better insight and understanding of the world. Additionally, numerous personality shades cannot be exposed and polished by theoretical studies and thus participation in sports activities allows a student to further polish those skills. As an example, a sportsman will have more strong nerves than a student who is performing extremely fabulous in the academic arena only. So, it is unquestionable that only academic and literary studies can produce well groomed and educated citizens.
In conclusion, participation in activities like arts, music, and sports is extremely important as it allows a student to explore the world and overcome the shortcomings in his personality. However, I opine that these ventures progress various expertise in a student which cannot be shaped by academic studies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o-curricular activities like arts, music , and sports, while others maintain that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69927536232 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19612656394 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4418219669 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816243519112 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354954582705 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428686904223 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0545558620776 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473820585187 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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