It is important for children to study a film at school to literature. To what extent you agree? Give example.

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It is important for children to study a film at school to literature. To what extent you agree? Give example.

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing

that it is essential for learners to study a film at school to learn literature. There is a widespread worry that

whould only lead to myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be

rejected.

There is a deluge of arguments is favor of my stance. There is most preponderant one is that the literature

and films are written centuries years ago that provide knowledge about traditions, cultures and rituals of the

ancestors. Not only can literature and films convey positive social messeges through stage dramas regarding

social issues, but these can also helps to pass our heritage and moral values to next generation as it has long

lasting effect on the mind. To cite an example, in India, ancient plays today maintain important place in high

school subjects which helps student to learn their culture and traditions.

Another pivotal aspects of this arguments is that students who study literature as a subject can have fruitful

career in paticular field. Besides, due to the studying film and literature students broaden the horizons of the

knowledge as they know about their inhabitants. To cite an instance, with help of these mediums learners

come to know about sacrifices of our nation's fear fighters.

To conclude, having pondered over above stated, it is crystal clear that benefits of literature and films are

indeed too great to ignore.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, regarding, so, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24193548387 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68508424809 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6033796887 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.12807881773 363% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.33497536946 469% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148619535037 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048122370178 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631964014715 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0466088740708 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792524238448 0.0609392437508 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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