It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is often believed that it is better to reside in a metropolis, however, other people prefer to live in the rural areas. The reason of this is convenience for the former and lesser pollution for the latter. My own view point will also be stated.
To begin with, deciding to live in a city could be promising as easier access to numerous establishments is one great advantage. The availability of various products and daily needs in a single shopping mall give many people much-coveted comfort and experience. They can readily buy commodities and other luxurious items in only few minutes away from their home. Apart from this, it is for a fact that there would be more opportunities for work in the city center. Large corporations are located in this area and could offer tremendous jobs to locals.
On the other hand, a healthier environment is what people sought after in staying in the countryside. Most vehicles and industrial plant are fewer in this area, thereby inducing little or almost no pollution at all. A greener and clean environment can also offer them a peaceful and calming feeling that are of prime considerations on their part. For example, some old folks are generally in favor of the rural setting as it gives them plain and tranquil lives.
To sum up, the issue of either living in the urban or in the outskirts of the city is dependent on the factor to consider and preference of people who would choose to live there. In my perspective, I would prefer residing in the metropolitan area as it will be more convenient for me to access into various shops, transportation and jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, apart from, for example, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76071428571 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77405757117 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6137726009 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132640288939 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421614716652 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542145459126 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779141596913 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243521945771 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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