Studying and establishing a good career for oneself is generally the aim of every individual to lead a prospoerius life. In some situation this goal become very difficult to attain because of many obstacles. Getting married before comleting studies can be one of those obstacle. I support the thought that person should not get married until they have completed their studies and they are capabale enough to support their partner in all circumstances.
Marrige is a huge commitment and Financial dependability can the the most important factor in it. If the person is not financial independent, then it can become the cause of many problems in household. To lead a good life money is the most important thing. For Example if the person will not earn well, than it will be difficult to fulfill essential needs like food, medical among other.
With financial factor, Emotional and maturity level is also a neccessity to create strong relation. Through studies, an indiviual becomes more mature. Their understanding of world around them gradually increases. With this their mutuarity level also expand.
Although getting married is everyone's personal decision, But Before taking such decisions we should always measure pros and cons of it. One Wrong decision can ruin your life. Getting married before completing studies has more negative sides as compare to positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this obstacle' or 'those obstacles'?
Suggestion: this obstacle; those obstacles
... before comleting studies can be one of those obstacle. I support the thought that person shou...
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Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...mitment and Financial dependability can the the most important factor in it. If the per...
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Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...mitment and Financial dependability can the the most important factor in it. If the per...
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Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ample if the person will not earn well, than it will be difficult to fulfill essenti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25114155251 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71814176526 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.988046117 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216488942514 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668350051879 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922373351509 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127262765801 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119588881178 0.0609392437508 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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