Large shopping malls are replacing small shops .
The importance of small shops which was always debatable has now become more controversial with the many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this arguments but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that small shops are very helpful for poor people because sometimes they are not able to buy things from the large shopping malls. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that mostly poor people are not interested to buy things from the large shopping malls. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that some people are working and they do not have enough time so they can buy things from their nearest shop. Besides, small shops are easily accessible to the local customer because individual can avail the benefits of the daily needs within a walking distance from their resistance.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of small shops are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...of reasons which will further elaborate this arguments but the most preponderant one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0041322314 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50989776223 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561983471074 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1737483172 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.1 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242894611209 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952504186293 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086311912493 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155737682532 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583757065599 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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