Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this
The habit of shopping is quite seen in all age groups from tots to elders. There is always a
craze for purchasing new items in every person's mind. This created a boon in shopping mall culture in recent years. Also, the same is replacing small shops to some extent in some of the areas. But the necessity for small shops cannot be eroded because of this malls trends. The details and opinions are discussed below.
On one hand, shopping malls provide the luxury and nice ambience where the families spend some time in shopping and hangout during any season of the year. Also, all sorts of items for each member of the family can be purchased in a single mall where one cannot waste time in searching for shops for everyone. The food court, games and play areas in malls helps them to spend some extra time for kids and grown ups. Moreover, the airconditioned ambience provides comfort shopping experience for most of them.
On the other hand, small shops will not lose its craze altogether since these are located in an accessible place near home so that, things can be purchased nearby instead of travelling to malls in traffic. At the same time, the cost of items in small shops are cheaper when compared with huge malls where one spends additional charges. Moreover, wasting extra moneys in games, food and activities can be avoided in small shops. This boosts small vendors which benefits economy.
To conclude, there must be a balance in purchasing habit of an individual in shopping malls and always should support small vendors who plays a major role in maintaining the price limits of the product and supports all people of different economical backgrounds.
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...small shops cannot be eroded because of this malls trends. The details and opinions ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81944444444 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34733522082 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9506761812 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5333333333 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 7.25397266985 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353777396103 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131186101457 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790776753553 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199950130572 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102173362493 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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