Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
In the last few years, there has been a great upsurge in urbanization. As a result, many multistory buildings are built widely for shopping malls. Some people opine that it has numerous advantages, while others revoke by saying that they are reducing the business of small shops. My opinion, however, coincides with the former notion. This essay will elaborate on the viewpoints and hence lead to a reasoned conclusion.
There is a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that these malls are eliminating the problem of space, as several shops can be opened inside them. In addition, it reduces the illegal parking on the roads that are the main reason for traffic jams. For example, these malls have several stories of underground parking, which is convenient and safer for customers. Therefore, they have become an indispensable necessity for our society.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that there are food courts, cinemas an0d other recreational centers within it. Not only they prove to be the best place to find everything under one roof but also save precious time. For instance, one can spend a family time enjoying every activity that is difficult in present hectic lifestyle. In addition, there are several occasions when discounts and other offers are provided. Hence, it is quite apparent that malls are proving fruitful by providing colossal advantages.
In view of the arguments outlined above, it can be concluded that looking at the present scenario malls is the need for our society having numerous benefits which are too dire to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06037735849 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62471751688 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3728931919 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8125 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10218418924 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306565943219 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329247043535 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601951622598 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430138541222 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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