Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not?
Nowadays, the significance of law and its corresponding impacts has sparked a public controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question Whether or not the law can change human behavior?”. While there are several drawbacks to the problem, I agree with the statement and believe that the effects of the law are of high importance. This essay will elaborate on both positive and negative aspects of this subject and thus will reach a logical conclusion.
From a social perspective, introducing the law is strongly related to ensuring the safety of other citizens, which means it might lead to both developments of society and keeping the community and country in order and harmony. For example, a group of reputable scientists working at a highly prestigious university conducted a qualitative study to demonstrate the relationship between illegal activities and an epidemic of petty crime as well as encouraging revenge. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that breaking the law is positively correlated with not only minor offenses but also criminal behavior.
Moreover, I believe that imposing the rules is attributable to preventing chaos in the society, in that it would lead to maintaining the fabric of society, codes of conducts, and transmitting social mems. A well-known example of such attributions is standardizing people’s habit, which is cause for concern since it was mistaken in taking law enforcement for granted. Thus, imposing hefty fines could play a significant role in preventing social unrest, leading to a sense of fear.
In conclusion, passing the law can be mutually beneficial under different circumstances. However, I agree entirely that an essential piece of legislation not only will prove to be worthwhile but also crucial to the society.
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- compulsory voting 11
- the law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not? 88
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- In most education system, students are assessed by written examinations. Do you think it is good idea or not? 88
- Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not? 88
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44014084507 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1945042913 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5507809452 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.454545455 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196687850968 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686346909787 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846065963115 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115794853708 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857663355687 0.0609392437508 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 55.0591133005 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.