These days, there is an ongoing debate among people about law and many believe that it controlling the human behaviour. While there is a history of law that runs hundreds of years of past, some people deter to consider law changes people. In this essay, I shall analyse both positive and negative impacts of abiding to the law and rational conclusion is presented at a later stage.
At the outlay, there are several reasons why many people prefer to abide the law. One of them is to live peacefully and make people disciplined. As the initial penalty for braking the law, verbal warnings are introduced. It is then followed by a written warning and a fine. Depends on the cause of breaking the law, people may face a jail time, a life sentence or death penalty in some countries. According to an academic article publish at Harvard University in regarding law, it is revealed that enforcing the law helps people towards prosperity.
Nevertheless, there are some people consider law is an obstruction for a peaceful lifestyle. Moreover, it is argued that harsh punishments such as life sentences, death penalty are cruel and it violates human rights. Yet, authorities tend to enforce law to civilise the society.
While there are strong arguments to support both sides of the case, my opinion is that enforcing law helps people to discipline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92543859649 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66335710486 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7611276684 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3846153846 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166671879924 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622444561569 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392138161713 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106063592523 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424969290055 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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