Laws can change human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

In the competitive world, laws play a vital role in our life which is laid by a government to maintain discipline and harmony in a country or nation. Some people think that laws prove to be very essential for our life but some people have contrary views. For me, this statement is feasible that laws are requisite in the 21st century.

To commence with, as we all know that laws have been made since immemorial. Without laws, we cannot imagine the real world in a discipline. Basically, we can say people will feel fear while doing the erroneous task. For instance, an Arab country, Dubai, laws are very hard and stern and everyone knows about the punishment while breaking laws. Hence, the crime rate is very less.

Furthermore, take traffic rules, for instance, fined are levied for jumping red lights and traffic violation. Punishments like imprisonment, life sentence, death sentence etcetera are made so that it acts as a deterrent for not indulging in illegal activities. Hence, people due to fear of these punishments abstain from activities that may disturb the laws in a society.

To conclude, it can be said that laws are necessary to survive in a competitive era where the crime rate is increasing day by day.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64719078414 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1674796651 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112496604328 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040452154174 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342820799508 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690119082259 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270709551642 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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