Laws can change human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Throughout history, the question of whether law can alter human behavior has generated a great deal of heated debate among sociologists and lawmakers. The popular belief seems to be that rules and regulations can change human behavior at a remarkable rate. I cannot but agree with this view for social and psychological reasons.
First and foremost, it is a well-established fact that rules make people more law-abiding in that it specifies social norms. Simply put, numerous studies have shown that societies with strict regulations can control people's behavior effectively.
More significantly, not only can law make individuals obedient to rules, but also it paves the way for the government to govern the society. In fact, rarely can we see a society with strict regulations in which people find the government ineffective. As a case in point, Scandinavian countries are characterized by their strict rules which makes their people feel happiness and exhilaration.
Another compelling argument in support of this view could be the fact that establishing neat rules and regulations
is highly likely to contribute to decreasing the rate of crime significantly. That is, people do not perpetrate crimes
in that they know that they have to accept the consequence of their behavior. In other words, relevant rules and deterrents halt the growth of criminal acts.
Having considered all sides, I conclude that law can change human behavior remarkably due to reasons such as making people more law-abiding, facilitating governing for the authorities and reducing the rate of misdemeanors and crimes among people from all walks of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
Throughout history, the question of whether law can alter human behavior has genera...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more law-abiding, facilitating governing for the authorities and reducing the rat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36821705426 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05604608985 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.050628465 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249730820727 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883132012701 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776159319044 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108809523144 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984846655432 0.0609392437508 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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