Parents are responsible for their children's behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

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Parents are responsible for their children's behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by amiratri on Sun, 02/18/2018 - 06:11

Over the past century, the question of whether parents should be liable for their children's behavior has generated a great deal of heated debate among psychologists and sociologists. The popular belief seems to be that parents should shoulder the responsibility of their children's acts. I cannot but agree with this view for
social and psychological reasons and I will analyze that through this essay.
First and foremost, it is a well-established fact that a noticeable part of individuals' personality forms in their
family. Simply put, a good upbringing provided by parents plays a colossal role in shaping children's character.
Thus, it only makes sense to consider the role of family as a prominent role.
More significantly, not only can the quality of upbringing affect individuals' personality, but also children usually
follow in their parents' footsteps. In fact, rarely can we see children who do not emulate their parents. Thus, it only makes sense to consider parents responsible for their children' behavior.
Another compelling argument in support of this view could be the fact that children are highly influenced by their parents. That is, parents behavior can inspire them at a remarkable rate.
All things considered, the conclusion to be drawn is that parents are liable for their children's behavior due to reasons such as shaping the child's character in family, emulating parents by children and undeniable influence of parents on children. However, it is worth mentioning that in some particular circumstances such as the effect of
society on children and peer pressure other factors should be recognized as major culprits.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
Over the past century, the question of whether parents should be liable for their chil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, well, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37307692308 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98599046436 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565384615385 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2162141486 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.12807881773 242% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388735193556 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142476605397 0.0925447433944 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103851477929 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135462610909 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134030469464 0.0609392437508 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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