"For less developed countries, disadvantages in tourism are greater than advantages". Discuss, give your opinion and examples
One of the most debatable issues is how tourism has disadvantages in less developed countries than advantages. I completely agree with the above statement. I support this way for two main reasons which I will explore in this essay.
Firstly, I strongly believe that tourism plays an important role in less developed countries. Moreover, tourism has a lot of drawbacks in these less developed countries. For example, it has been found that 99% of our history diminsh by people in these these " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">countries. because they are not keen about it's value. so people must not neglect this important things.
Secondary, I think such as convinced that tourism tourism " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">can be a major aspect that relates to modern society these days, so people must pay close attention to it, besides, the importance of national income must not be overlooked because because " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">foriegn people come from all over the world may affect our country. For instance, an Australian article mentions that tourists are think it will be risk if they travel to the less developed countries because of diseases, wars, and level of people there.
In conclusion, tourists prosperity become undeniable with good communities. it has been found that not only government can effect but people people " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">awerness can also too. I expected this trend will continues to increase in the modern future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...an also too. I expected this trend will continues to increase in the modern future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95539033457 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.83437381794 2.71678728327 141% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546468401487 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 138.77396376 50.4703680194 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955051272856 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578350611551 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785125614487 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818339741367 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625117179539 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 11.5310837438 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.