In less developed countries, tourism has developed significantly in the last decade, discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
The important of in less developed countries, tourism has developed significantly in the last decade which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of tourism has develop significantly in the last decade has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend. It can be agreed that tourism developed quickly in last decade helps in development in tourism as a key of economy.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why tuorism developed quickely in developed countries but the most conspicious on stem's from the fact that under developed countries tuorism helps to increase variety of services like hotel, transport, restaurant and entertainment. As an illustration, tourism under developed countries helps to increase number of job and development of infrastructure such as due to help of tourism a indian men in nepal got a job as a directiing manager of tourism board it is benificial for job oppoturnities. In addittion, tuorism helps in finincial growth of country. Thus, tourism under developed country helps in to control pollution.
Neverthless, there remain same drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of under developed country tourism is developing day by day but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that it is harmful to the countory. For instance it will provide negative affact to country for e.g loss of culture, change in lifestyel, and change in language and costumes. Furthermore, tourism under developed country may increase crime rate snd drug addiction.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of tourism under developed country is prominent, although the way of tourism under developed countries may increase the thieves which may affect whole country and lead to finincial crisis should be well handeled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tructure such as due to help of tourism a indian men in nepal got a job as a dire...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...such as due to help of tourism a indian men in nepal got a job as a directiing mana...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ries may increase the thieves which may affect whole country and lead to finincial crisis sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36301369863 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99985143812 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.9509146935 50.4703680194 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.363636364 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37305872833 0.242375264174 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17545232409 0.0925447433944 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113296264656 0.071462118173 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247153278553 0.151781067708 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124998336831 0.0609392437508 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.