Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate how personality trades derive of a person, which attracted myriads of controversies and drawn the attention from the public. It can be said that, financial and economic status has direct influence on person's life, whereas other stands with different prospective, and they believe it’s all depends on person characteristics. This essay will elaborate both sides and thus lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous factors which can be consider for person's personality with their decision making process. To consider this fact, person characteristics has direct influence in their decision making, interaction with other people, as well as identity. As per research conducted by Oxford University resulted, 78% of extroverted people always prefer to stay in city, also prefer to work in office, while 86% introverted people usually work at home and enjoy live in country side. Thus, personalities affect the way of making choses everywhere in their life.
In contrast, some people believe the person's life depends on their financial and economic status, which is also considerable for person's personality types. To cite an example, higher educated people mostly have management work and they also got chances to travel all over the world, whereas, other lower educated people mostly have lower or physical job to live their life with limited access of public benefits. According to study which I conducted during universities, 80% of people got opportunities to life higher standard life as well as abroad travel for vacations, while 90% of people with lower education were into physical work with some accessories in their life.
Agglomerating all points above, it can be concluded that, person's life has direct affect from personalities trades without ignore the other facts including education and economic status.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... In contrast, some people believe the persons life depends on their financial and eco...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...concluded that, persons life has direct affect from personalities trades without ignore the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46917808219 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80727306147 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2169965055 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.181818182 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150128194674 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727101492909 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519954433903 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108546980296 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252545686506 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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