Many companies involve employees in decision making policy. Some people think that it is important for the progression of the company. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
There are a great number of people who interpret the effects of involving the employees in decisions as thoroughly constructive, while others hold an opponent’s view. I am inclined to believe that the employees should be immensely engaged in making the decisions. In this essay, I elucidate my point of view by discussing the advantages of this involvement.
First of all, it is argued that involving the employees in important decisions play a pivotal role in creating adroit people. This may be attributed to the fact that this involvement would create a feeling of accomplishment and competence in employees, therefore, their enthusiasm, determination will amplified, which provoke them to do uphill struggle towards many daunting tasks, and catalyze the surge of learning something new. From my own experience, I have been involved in a tremendous number of decision makings, so that I always started feeling as a part of company.
In addition, it is argued if companies want to have prosperous future, they should know that engaging the staff in important decisions is paramount to success of any business. This is to say that the employees have been involved in a great number of projects, and they have acquired sophisticated knowledge in wide range of subjects, therefore, they are able to suggest initiative and intuitive ideas. A research study conducted by Yale University in 2014 has found that employee engagement in decision makings could boost the company’s sales and popularity.As these examples illustrate, by engaging the staff in decision making, the performance of both organizations and individuals would be constructively and enormously affected.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that employees empowerment could accelerate and appreciate the company productivity. It is highly recommended that managers should take full responsibility for their employees’ suggestions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34620057925 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.1270421221 50.4703680194 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.181818182 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215213522397 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785630790587 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362799428378 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122033951541 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187791951827 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.