In many countries , children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. some people regard this as completely wrong. while other consider it a valuable work experience , important for learning and talking responsibility . what is you opinion
The importance of in my countries , children are engaged in different kind of paid work some people regard this as completely wrong . which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion . this essay will elaborate both aspect of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the that fact .children's to work little age . but very much experience from childhood ,not focus on study. another pivotal aspect for this argument is that needless to say that all these merits stand work experience in a good stead
However, there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that distract them form studies over-burden hence it is apparent why many are against work experience
According to the argument aforementioned above one can conclusion that the benefits of work experience are instrumental indeed nevertheless ,the potential drawbacks should not be over looked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 1207.87684729 82% => OK
No of words: 188.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26063829787 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70944989003 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.5024630542 180% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.007872176 50.4703680194 373% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.8 104.977214359 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6 20.9669160288 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.25397266985 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33707158339 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201039548502 0.0925447433944 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191535095448 0.071462118173 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179868992172 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116150811608 0.0609392437508 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 12.6369458128 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.9458128079 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.3980295567 162% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.