The effect of people suffering due to poor health, which was debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of the unhealthy lifestyle has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on people’s well-being. It can be said that detrimental lifestyle can lead to poor health. This essay will elaborate how unhealthy lifestyle of people leads to the deterioration of their health and how medical institutions can help resolve this problem and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are a number of reasons why unhealthy lifestyle of people affects their health, but the most preponderant one is due to harmful health behaviours like smoking, drinking and poor diet. For example, a recent study suggests that many individuals in western societies have non-communicable diseases like diabetes, mental illness and cancer to name a few, thanks to their detrimental lifestyle. Moreover, the hectic work life and daily long commutations leave no time for their physical activities. The relationship between lifestyle and health should, therefore, be highly considered.
Approaches to deal with poor health due to unhealthy lifestyle are numerous, but the most conspicuous one is with the help of medical institutions which is not unattainable and impracticable but feasible and comprehensible. For instance, medical institutes can organize free and regular body check-ups to educate people about their health. Furthermore, medical and local authorities can educate the importance of balanced diet and nutrition for children and infants.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that leading an unhealthy lifestyle can lead to deterioration of one’s health, although the way medical institutions can intervene and solve the problem should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61428571429 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16275357941 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2623106609 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47794329775 0.242375264174 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16510160911 0.0925447433944 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981071369139 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279806293822 0.151781067708 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125627489654 0.0609392437508 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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