Many people encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in number of people believing that younger people to leave home when they become older, while other think they should stay at home with the family. There is a widespread worry that this will not lead to myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that leaving home can not only contribute to solution for earning money, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offer, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can only enhance the productivity, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence in concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm potential the benefit of stay at home with the family. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not only realised its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today’s ever- changing lifestyle. Beside, it’s impact on (statement) is far-changing indeed.
In view of the arguments outline above, one van conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefit of staying home are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... will not lead to myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'offers'?
Suggestion: offers
...anks to the wide range of advantages it offer, not only can one benefit more when it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94861660079 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6421025412 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7195926984 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.818181818 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281427243982 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910414946703 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149873909389 0.071462118173 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164478885458 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112358006251 0.0609392437508 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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