many people hosting an international sporting event like Olympics and football world cup is beneficial to a country, while others disagree.

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many people hosting an international sporting event like Olympics and football world cup is beneficial to a country, while others disagree.

Times are changing and so are the long-held beliefs of modern man. A recent controversy that has further flared among the elites and intellectuals of all notions is whether many people hosting an international event, while others agree, I disagree with the statement. Personally, I prefer to maintain a mixed stance on this issue of international sports events. both of views has positive and negative impacts in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, it must be acknowledged that these games in developing countries can afford the expenses, which spending from communities. For example, hospitals and education departments more important than international events. These reasons shed enough light on the significance of international games.
However, the above discussed convincing arguments, I feel compelled to consider that a strong role sports game encourages to people for taking part in games. For instance, Sachin Tendulkar is famous as the best player in a cricket game which game is playing at international level and people can meet them. A recent survey conducted by Cambridge University confirmed that 25% a majority. This evidence declares a loud and clear that education and hospitals are predominant than international events can't be overlooked.
It indeed without saying anything that games boost up confidence, but dominance influence of more development of regions should not be ignored at any cost. Every cloud has silver lining likewise, they offer is worth going for.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 363, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Both
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, look, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03725856038 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683982683983 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5073957907 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3076923077 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16383864099 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478541983332 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693653079229 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889029267466 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818363031886 0.0609392437508 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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