Many people think regions affect successful people. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished people who are influenced by the region they belong to.
It is conspicuous that, the environment where a person grew has a significant impact on his or her mind. Considering this, some people argue that success of an individual depends upon the environment in which he has grown up, while others opine surroundings doesn’t affect. However, in my opinion, native place’s environment is only one factor and a person’s attitude, capability and determination also play a pivotal role in achieving a success. The following paragraph will discuss both sides and offer an appropriate conclusion.
On one hand, environment plays an important role in inculcating many traits in a person. An individual learns many qualities such as language development, leadership, and social skills from his or her surroundings. For instance, Mahatma Gandhi a famous Indian leader received most of his leadership skills from people with whom he spent his childhood times. In addition, individuals who acquired good guidance from their family and school teachers in their young age, easily accomplish their goals and target in the later part of their life.
On the other hand, other factors also play a significant role in influence a person. An individual who has a strong determination and focussed mind can overcome problems in the path of his or her goal. For instance, Amitabh Bachhan, a famous Indian actor who was rejected when he gave his first audition proved himself because of his strong willpower. Furthermore, there are many people in our society who took birth in a very poor family but because of their hard work they able to change their situation and become rich.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that, only native environment may not be behind an individual’s success. There are a lot of other factors that take an individual towards success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22336769759 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03096679655 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6501754881 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113678699416 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388400286885 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289268285248 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071344377217 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140077141905 0.0609392437508 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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