Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to.
The importance of region on success of person which was debatable has now become more controversial.The substantial influence of region has sparked the controversy over recent years on the person success.Considerably, it can be agreed that people who grew up in better society can be a better person in future and his hard-work, determination is also an another factor which contributes to his outstanding career.The essay will elaborate that only native environment may not be the factor behind the successful person and it will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons the most conscious one stems from the fact that, a person spend most of his life in his hometown so, behaviours of people surround him also affect the person. For instance, Mahatma Gandhi is a leader who learnt his most of the leadership skills from the society where he lives.
On the other hand, it is not only native environment that is responsible for the development of an individual and his success. After an individual moves out from his native place to some other place for work he tends to learn new things that he was not aware about it in his home place. Moving to other places introduces an individual to new ideas and new ways of doing things. It allows a person to think in a broad perspective and this open-minded thinking plays a vital role in a person’s success. For example, Dhirubhai Ambani a famous Indian businessman achieved all his success only after leaving his home town. While moving to different places he learnt different people and various skills which he was not aware of at his native place. And these new learning helped him rule the business world.
To conclude, only native environment may not be behind an individual’s success. There are a lot of other factors that take an individual towards success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 313.0 242.827586207 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95207667732 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95219077826 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507987220447 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.808097248 50.4703680194 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236745879481 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784369080944 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733548988569 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135357392423 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594164995847 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.94827586207 297% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.7865168539 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.