In the real world, everyone wants to be a successful person. To grow as an effective person, there are innumerable factors which play a pivotal role in human life. Some people think that it principally depends on the person’s native place. On the contrary, some of the people claim that success is also depended on the willingness, passion and hard work. In my opinion, both the sides are extremely vital to get success.
To begin with the native place, the native place is the environment where a child is grown up and get the moral education. In a way, the human behaviour depends on the person’s native place. Parents, teachers, and friends help to nourish the infant by giving the essential knowledge of life. This knowledge can be depended on the type of surroundings in which they live. For example, a good surrounding makes a child brilliant human begin; while in bad surroundings, there is more probability that the child would go on wrong track.
On the flip side, apart from the native place, there are also numerous factors which take part equivalently in success, such as willingness, passion, and hard work, without these aspects a man cannot test the savor of success. There are various examples in the present world. One of them is Dhiru Bhai Ambani, a successful businessman, who did not belong to the rich family; nevertheless, his desires and hard work made him able to move out from that severe situations and got an exemplary success in his sector.
In the nutshell, the foregoing discussions propound that in success, native place plays a vital role, but other factors have also equal significance. In my point of view, native place work as an initiator to understand the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, while, apart from, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92439862543 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75677633827 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 3.65517241379 301% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4761209891 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5333333333 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159876793029 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624520079838 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632136421743 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100465436513 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659259261531 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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