It is thought by many people that success of people depends on the regions they belong to. In my opinion, i disagree with this notion and this essay will discuss that despite few advantages, it is individual's dedication, commitment and determination hold the key to success.
To begin with, people who are successful and influential in society have certain qualities which are ubiquitous. These people are incredibly determine and focused towards their goal which lead them to success. In addition to this, successful people are committed towards a cause and they relentlessly pursue. To cite an example, American president Barack Obama was born and spent his formative years in Kenya, but his growth, his vision, all came when he came to U.S.A. Therefore, it can be said that its individual's role which decides the fate not the region.
However, region also plays a small role in shaping personality of an individual because the socio-economic condition of the place influences the choices an individual make. For instance, there are places in world where crime rate is maximum and its because of the socio-economic condition of the society. In other words, if people comes from a place where education, researchers, liberal views are given importance then one would find few good qualities in inhabitant of that place.
In conclusion, this essay has discussed that the success of an individual is completely dependent on the individual. Despite few influences of native region on people, its the certain traits which plays vital role in the success of an individual. In my opinion, people get success because they have different qualities which are independent from the his background and region he or she belongs to.
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- The illiterate of the 21st century will not be those who cannot read and write , but those who cannot learn, unlearn and relearn. Agree or disagree. 77
- There are more men or women in certain jobs and there s nothing we can change about it Do you agree with that 94
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples. 65
- Education is the single most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree? 88
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.175 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8548897366 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0126525422 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255667158655 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102858037728 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100218012518 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167793287168 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700208094342 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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