Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Today, there are many factors which help people to become a successful person. People think regions help people to become a successful person. Regions are one of the factors which help to become successful. There are other factors are motivation, potential, talent and hard work. In a further paragraph, we will discuss regions affect a successful person.
Firstly, native regions influence the person. Regions are into two parts rural and urban. People are bound to follow which they see in their surroundings. The Urban region have excel life they see potential and the successful people which help to motivate them. But, in a rural area, people only think about the survival of them. For example, many of the cricketers belong to metro cities so it influences people to see them and get motivated and follow their dreams. Therefore, thinks are different in a rural area there are no such environment and opportunities and they think only about a slice of bread to survive. This exemplifies that people influenced my regions they belong from.
The second reason, people belong from the small state also become a successful person. For example, Dhirubhai Ambani belongs from small cities of Gujarat and started their business reliance industries. Narendra Modi also belongs from small cities of Gujarat and he is prime minister of our country. It exemplifies, that regions do not matter it is all about motivation and hard work.
In conclusion, region and influence are the others factor which helps a person to become successful. The main point is determination and hard work which helps people to become successful. Thus, regions do not matter at all people matters and his hard work and determination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'excelled'.
Suggestion: excelled
...eir surroundings. The Urban region have excel life they see potential and the success...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63161460099 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471428571429 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6932107473 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.75 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422487929433 0.242375264174 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156001779624 0.0925447433944 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10937839448 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256263308788 0.151781067708 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994322269891 0.0609392437508 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.94827586207 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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