The mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
In this day and age, the mass media have an essential effect to society and form our opinion and characters. Although the mass media regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by many of people, there are a number of people hold an opposing viewpoint. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some influences of mass media on societies.
To begin with, there are various reason to support the mass media as the influential tools in our opinion and characters. At first, Although the mass media may be no honest in reports and news, they can aware people of news and events from around the world. For example, when I was an IT student in university, I got many information of new technologies from magazines related to information technology and It programs on the TV.
In addition, while some Radio and Television programs may have negative effects like luxury-oriented, they can have many advantages. The mass media can replace our wrong view with the new and true viewpoint. For instance, a recent research conducted by MNT University researchers in 2015 shows that they changed and improved their behavior against the environment, a significant number of people, After watching the TV programs in the field of environmental issues.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about influences of mass media on the societies, my personal sentiment is that the benefits of media are outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08438818565 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93615106978 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.71428571429 350% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4741518007 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277457513645 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119661681242 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10597005376 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163386818518 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676849284623 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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