Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion?
Nowadays, the influence of mass media has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether mass media works as a pivot to shape the society or not?”. It is a widely held view that the influence of mass media is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that media such as TV, newspaper, and radio play a vital role in each society. Therefore, I express some reasons to support this idea. First and foremost is that the public awareness will be raised in terms of socio-economic, technology, medical fields, and keeping up with the latest news. Secondly, the juveniles will be able to promote their theoretical knowledge, cognitive skills, and beneficial information as well as enjoying educational and documentary programs. In addition to this information, people’s culture, character, and attitudes are shaped by mass media. A group of socialists, working at a prestigious university conducted that the life has become convenient by the availability of video camera, useful websites, print media, computer data, and Email message.
However, there is no doubt that constant use of mass media provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that some violent and unpleasant programs in TV cause damaging consequences, such as behavioral corruption to the society. Moreover, newspaper comprising flashy advertisement that tempts people to purchase the products without knowing them.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that mass media as a pivot to shape the society must be taken into consideration to widespread uses of mass media. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... the influence of mass media has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 304.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32894736842 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02928201316 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3739757821 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.615384615 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214098839814 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683484840339 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712284324527 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129458047718 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513095447451 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.