Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion?
The influence of mass media like TV, newspaper and radio on young generation has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expresses their views both in favor and against the very idea of mass media's influence on youth through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate that how TV, newspaper and radio can motivate and inspire the young people and how it can be dangerous for social skills.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why mass media motivate the young people. First and foremost reason is we can have 24 hour entertainment in our living room and keep informed about news around the world. Moreover, many reality shows comes on TV which can motivate the young people to participate in contest and enhance their skills.
On the other hand, it has some drawbacks. People can waste their time for watching TV for long time which can affect their eye sight. Furthermore, children do not want to do outdoor activities and this can lead to many physical problems. Thus, mass media can be negative for social skills.
While on the other hand, there are people will continue to wrangling about the facts of mass media's influence on youth. I would like to conclude that mass media has a good source of knowledge. However, it has some drawbacks as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it can be dangerous for social skills. At the outset, there are numerous reason...
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Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...TV for long time which can affect their eye sight. Furthermore, children do not want to d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81422924901 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55863452507 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553359683794 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.041827152 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6923076923 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219452870333 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821244796041 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689097607573 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133241387848 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539334109037 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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