THE ADVANCED MEDICAL TECHNOLOGY WILL EXPAND HUMAN’S LIFE. DO YOU THINK IT IS A BLESSING OR CURSE?
The effect of advancement of medical technology expand human’s life, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of technological advancement has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of our modern life. It can be said that technological advancement of medical science is blessing for mankind. This essay will elaborate why improvement of medical technology is blessing for us and how it curse for us and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why medical technology is blessing for us, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that elderly people are able to share their valuable experience to the society and people learn so many things from their activities. Moreover, people share their knowledge from generation to generation. For example, research revealed by UN elderly people are more potential than younger people.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of advanced medical technology, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that elderly people is consider as burden to the society, because of aged people are more likely suffer from diseases, the medical bills of a country are much higher for these people. Moreover, majority of elderly people are not physically and mentally fit for employment.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of advancement of medical technology is prominent, although there has some drawbacks, which can be well handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.375 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94239683772 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526515151515 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.2581695607 50.4703680194 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301399654749 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130035739512 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984780678989 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204060730872 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136700610834 0.0609392437508 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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