Medical technology has increased average life expectancy. Is it curse or blessing?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that the advancements in medical technology and its implications.There is no denying fact that recent research and development in medicine provide better quality of life. However, some critics saw an adverse effects due to this such as rise in population and immunity of viruses. Yet, I still opine of the view that disadvantages caused by improved medical practices outweigh its drawbacks. This essay will elaborate both sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons why advanced medical practices are helping us to lead a better life and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that many diseases or physical conditions can be cured today. As a result, people can live longer and able to spend their quality time with their family and loved ones. For example, doctors today are equipped to perform complex cardiovascular surgeries accurately with the help of latest technologies better than in the past.Therefore, the medical technologies are certainly a blessing.
Nevertheless, some pessimistic people hold an opposing view and tend to believe that these introduction of technologies in medical field is ultimately increase the world population. According to them, such advanced treatments of critically ill patients and the result of extend their life exacerbates the problem of already increasing world population. Additionally, some critics argued that the frequent usage of antibiotics to treat illness is strengthening the virus, which evolve from its initial form and spread more infections.
To recapitulate, we can say that technological developments in medicine and treatment procedure is providing huge advantage for people. Although its impact of population growth should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47569444444 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14916390714 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628472222222 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1093031783 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.416666667 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171633888358 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544701286015 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523773927075 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940113107402 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333525268834 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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