The last 100 years have seen huge technological advancements in every field of research. What, in your opinion, is one of the most important technological achievements in the last 100 years?
In the 21st century. The world has seen a tremendous amount of technological advancements in various fields including medicine, communication, transportation, and so on. In my opinion, the major development in this century was air travel and the invention of computers. In this essay, I will elaborate on how such technological innovations help people.
Firstly, we enjoy numerous benefits from the invention of airplanes and its commercial use and the most conspicuous one that stems from the fact that the modern flights enormously reduce the time to travel between one place to another. It can be argued that this reachability to the far end of the world is the prominent factor for the success of globalization. For instance, the commercial airlines are now operating all over the globe and it will take no time to reach any part of the world to conduct business and explore investment opportunity by entrepreneurs. Thus, I would argue that this is one of the most useful inventions of research happened in recent years.
Secondly, another crucial technological achievement is the introduction of computers. In fact, we are able to create sophisticated systems and creative products by using computers. Computers also play a vital role in developing new ideas and solving problems. For instance, Space exploration and satellites are possible today, largely due to the computer systems in use and its capabilities that we feed into them.
In light of the discussion above, it can be concluded that the creation of air travel and computing systems are the most vital achievements that was happened in recent time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20992366412 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13718401557 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8644809936 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115669807837 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041273437128 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473033509297 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068489589786 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363922149119 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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