Medical technology is responsible for human’s life expectancy. Is it a curse or a blessing to the society as
a whole?
Nowadays our life is fully dependent on the medical technology and as you can see that medical
technology development is growing very fast phase. Everyday new technology coming up and giving the
solution against each disease. I will discuss my point of view on medical technology.
To begin with benefits of medical technology to human life, there are enormous advantages of medical
technology for curing any type of disease. Due to advanced medical technology people are not going for
natural cure of any disease they rely on curing with technology. For instance, Cancer is dangerous and
non-curable disease. With this advanced medical technology cancer can be 100% curable within 6
months of time.
On the contrary part, there is a numerous curse of medical technology as most of the people rely on this
technology and they avoid disease in natural way due to its process is slow. In past decade most of the
people follow natural process for curing of any diseases which good for their body as it is not distort to
body.
In conclusion, medical technology is responsible for human life expectancy as it cures any level of
disease so people are fully rely on that and they avoid natural process in curing of disease due to its
longer time even it is helpful to some extent.
- Students with degrees earn high salary than who doesn’t have an academic qualification. Therefore, some argue that they have to pay the full cost of their courses. Give your opinion. 72
- Travelling to study is over-rated. We have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really necessary for tertiary studies? 72
- Experience is more effective and useful than books and formal education. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? 77
- “The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education” Einstein. Discuss this quote. 77
- Is competitive environment in school or university good or bad Discuss and give your own experiences as examples 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
...ology and as you can see that medical technology development is growing very fast phase....
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Solution
...w technology coming up and giving the solution against each disease. I will discuss my...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
...re are enormous advantages of medical technology for curing any type of disease. Due to ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Natural
...l technology people are not going for natural cure of any disease they rely on curing...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Non-curable
...For instance, Cancer is dangerous and non-curable disease. With this advanced medical tec...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Months
...y cancer can be 100% curable within 6 months of time. On the contrary part, there ...
^^^^^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
...gy as most of the people rely on this technology and they avoid disease in natural way d...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 97, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'distorted'.
Suggestion: distorted
... which good for their body as it is not distort to body. In conclusion, medical tec...
^^^^^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Body
...or their body as it is not distort to body. In conclusion, medical technology is...
^^^^
Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Longer
...ocess in curing of disease due to its longer time even it is helpful to some extent....
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58017132053 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 139.433497537 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497716894977 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8415075875 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267792059942 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119871841351 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723165566285 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1159794066 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101577606169 0.0609392437508 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.