Mobile phones
The importance of mobile phone which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This essay will elaborate both aspects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that mobile phones are very beneficial for our society as well as mobile help in international work and also to communicate with anyone around the world. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that mobile help student in work and also helpful in any business. Besides mobile phone helpful in many sectors like colleges, schools, and hospital. Needless to say, that all these merits stand mobile phone in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the alarming fact is that mobile phone is a wastage of time as well as mobile phones are very harmful for eyes . Besides children continuously use phone which has very bad impact on their studies and also it have bad effect on mind. Hence, it is apparent why many are against mobile phone.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of mobile phone are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless the potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08823529412 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58247477428 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4996229705 50.4703680194 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.090909091 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488047580522 0.242375264174 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22227490134 0.0925447433944 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140649622498 0.071462118173 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308400191177 0.151781067708 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123633766037 0.0609392437508 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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