Our global diaspora is broadly segregated into two halves oriental and occidental. There are bound to be difference on social, economical and cultural front as well. Therefore, the issue of life becoming more stressful is of no exception and irrefutable. I will explain why with pertinent argument and examples. There are advantages and disadvantages of modern life.
In other to justify the view point, modern world has offer humans better technologies that has made life easier for all. This technologies has always cause pain to humans as well. Today humans no longer talk to one another physically rather they communicate through social media. Which deprived them from associating socially. Research has shown that lack of social activities can lead to mental illness.
Another, pivotal aspect of my stance is constant car dependent. Which stop us from walking with our legs and remain physically fit. Although, many people think that modern life has nothing to do with stress. But I opined that 80% of stress is cause by work, school and technology.
Although, the situation seems dire, but there are severe ways we can make tangible changes. Firstly, government should implement organization that would regulate the required numbers an individual can work in a fourth night. Secondly, people should reduce the time they spend on social media and try to associate with their friends and loved ones physically.
To conclude, although modern life is highly beneficial but we must be prudent to strike a balance, logical and rational for the optimal and fruitful outcomes of efforts or utilization of resources.
- People always wants than what they have already or something even different or they are never satisfy what they have already do you agree with fhis statement 61
- It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sports should be compulsory for all students in all bokf 85
- The graph below shows radio and television audiences through out the day in 1992. 56
- A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefits cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced? 78
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary.Choose which position you most agree with and discu 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: have; haven
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'caused'.
Suggestion: caused
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... they communicate through social media. Which deprived them from associating socially...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ith our legs and remain physically fit. Although, many people think that modern life has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2471042471 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69984404804 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679536679537 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1651305357 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20941969126 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596649135792 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667047206061 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101960988169 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514655371296 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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