Most artists earn low salary and should, therefore, receive social welfare amount from the governments in order to continue working on their skill.
Discuss to what extent you agree or disagree with examples or observations.
Nowadays, the artists around the world are increasing at a rapid pace, but the sad reality is that they are not paid well. While some people think that the artists should be paid with a welfare amount from the government in order to resume their quality work, others believe that it is not good to pay the artists. This essay will discuss the reasons why the artists should be provided with a substantial amount to continue working on their skills.
Generally, the welfare amount gives a greater motivation to the artists. When the artists are paid more, they get an interest to work, and they perform to their full potential to give the masterpiece works. For instance, the government of India has started providing money to the top artists in the country in order to maintain the artists in the industry. To sum up, providing a social welfare amount to the artists is critical so that they don't go to any other jobs.
On the other hand, it is not always possible to provide all the artists with the money from the government. This is because there is a possibility that it may turn out that the government should provide the fund to a lot of artists. In order to avoid this, the government should provide the money to the deserving artists in each country.
Overall, this essay discussed why paying the artists with a welfare amount is a good option and why it is not possible to pay all the artists in each country. In my opinion, the government should pay the social welfare amount to all the deserving artists in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64233576642 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41867016528 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434306569343 0.580463131201 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9578237365 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.0 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295181645847 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126887200789 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674509290602 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196306237465 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525767241927 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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