mother plays a better role in bringing up children rather than father do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
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although such topics will never yield a consensu...
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... will never yield a consensual agreement,a dialogue on mother plays a better role ...
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...p children rather than father can lead a thought provoking discussions. my view ...
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...lead a thought provoking discussions. my view is that,irrespective of numerous a...
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... provoking discussions. my view is that,irrespective of numerous aurgument that exist on eit...
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Suggestion: , mother
...rous aurgument that exist on either side,mother are more considered in bringing childre...
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...ildren through the course of this essay i shall explain my point of view by cons...
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...ring both sides of the argument. firstly,mothers are more attached with children...
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...th sides of the argument. firstly,mothers are more attached with children which i...
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...dhood.they care about their kid and they even thinks about kids future.accordin...
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...they care about their kid and they even thinks about kids future.according to t...
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...ey care about their kid and they even thinks about kids future.according to the wom...
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...re of their children by communicating. however,always mother thinks of planning childr...
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...heir children by communicating. however,always mother thinks of planning children futu...
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...hinks of planning children future. secondlly,fathers are also concerned about their ...
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...planning children future. secondlly,fathers are also concerned about their kids but...
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... kids but not like the mothers bonding. fathers are trying the best to parallize the bo...
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...to be equal.when a daughter is concerned,the point of view is they cant disccus thei...
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... is concerned,the point of view is they cant disccus their personal body problems wi...
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...ind mother is more involved.consequently,fathers are attached with with their sons,whe...
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...olved.consequently,fathers are attached with with their sons,where we find they both can ...
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...hers are attached with with their sons,where we find they both can discuss the probl...
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...n discuss the problem like friends i see that there is a potential evidence ...
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...n discuss the problem like friends i see that there is a potential evidence ...
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... to support the argument i have provided,and hence,my opinion is that i agree,mother...
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...t the argument i have provided,and hence,my opinion is that i agree,mother plays a ...
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...e provided,and hence,my opinion is that i agree,mother plays a better role in bri...
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... a better role in bringing up children i am inclined to belive that mother has b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41434262948 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38997707548 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.5024630542 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 202.833264859 50.4703680194 402% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.5 104.977214359 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.8333333333 20.9669160288 200% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.25397266985 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.12807881773 266% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.33497536946 544% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23350151007 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134526146585 0.0925447433944 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120539387862 0.071462118173 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959767765279 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10942818253 0.0609392437508 180% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 12.6369458128 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.9458128079 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.3980295567 177% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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