Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one's life, such as time with family and leisure needs. How important do you think is their balance? Why do people find it is hard to achieve.
The importance of maintain the balance between work and other aspects which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that people have not enough time to spend with their family as they are busy in their work. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that it is very difficult for them to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects. Needless, to say all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that it is also very important to take break from their work as if they are health they can do work easily. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that they should do some physically activity which is beneficial for them. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of maintains the balance between family, work and leisure activity are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8862745098 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49990695713 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7393688114 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.272727273 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273471626036 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970171270682 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892874609399 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169312480081 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419895066333 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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