Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspect of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? What kind of people would find it hard to achieve?
Nowadays, it is impossible to denied that work life balance is a lesson everyone must learn. However, many people underestimate the importance of the balance, while some people understand but they cannot achieve. This essay will elaborate the importance of work life balance through health and efficiency view including examples of people who can hardly achieve it.
To commence with, an appropriate balance brings benefits to your health. Research shows that over working and too much pressure will harm your health physically and mentally. For example, a person with too much work and lack of free time is more likely to have mental disease such as depression or even lead to higher chance of suicide. In Asia countries, people that always have to work overtime like advertising would find it hard to achieve a balance as their working time is not fixed, leading to high chance of overload and lack of holidays.
Secondly, wrong work life balance means lower working efficiency. Too tough or loose environment both slow down the speed and quality of work. For instance, a worker with too much work cannot produce good product in a short period of time because he is overloaded. On the other hand, if the worker who could spend free time with his family and relax, he would produce better product. Artiest and writer may face this problem when they have too much workload and break the balance, they can’t meet the target on time.
In conclusion, work life balance benefits both the employer and employee in different aspect. The importance of balance is underrated in some country and government should work on educating citizens so that all people would find it possible to achieve.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... cannot produce good product in a short period of time because he is overloaded. On the other ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98233215548 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47417961337 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1017119517 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316969244021 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11193773673 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598617428538 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20130716233 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292876299815 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... cannot produce good product in a short period of time because he is overloaded. On the other ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98233215548 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47417961337 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1017119517 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316969244021 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11193773673 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598617428538 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20130716233 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292876299815 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.