Today's generation is always running behind getting more and more physical assets than mental peace. To develop a healthy society we need a physically and mentally strong people. In the following paragraph, I will discuss this more in detail.
First of all, let's talk about why people do overtime at work places. People wants more and more money so that they can posess more costly items for luxury. To full fill their desires they spend more time at work place and try to earn more money. Due to that they are ignoring their personal life and social life. For example a person will get more salary in nightshift due to odd hour timing, people working in night shift they are not able to spend anytime with their family members because in day time they complete their sleep when family members wants to enjoy with them.
Due to this, people are getting sick day by day, they are going into deep depression. This is also hampering their physical health as well. Due to long office hours people are suffering back pain, headache, weak eye sight etcetera. Due to nightshift working hours people are facing sleep deficiency problems.
As a conclusion, I want to say that a person should spend sufficient time with their family members so that he or she can maintain a balanced life. Long or odd working hours are making people unhealty in both ways physically and mentally. Work life balance is very much required, it will be good for every person as well as for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...are suffering back pain, headache, weak eye sight etcetera. Due to nightshift working hou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, as for, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72093023256 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21048519946 2.71678728327 81% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9050781276 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334411856828 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108045059975 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830830168094 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182852462902 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12884428445 0.0609392437508 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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