Nowadays, some seniors chose to live in retirement communities with other old people rather than their adult children. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Nowadays, living of old people in retirement communities is becoming more popular in developed countries as well as in developing countries. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon of living seniors with old people in old homes.
At the outset, there are several benefits of living old people in old homes as they enjoy the company of their peers and fellows. Old people feel more comfortable in the company of their age fellows as they have same interest, moments of pleasure and sadness. Furthermore, living in people of their own age provides more motivation, happiness and purpose of life living in their age fellows.
On contrary, lifestyle of young people and adults is changing at rapid pace and in this fast and everchanging technology era people do not have enough time to look after other people and their old parents. So, old people do not feel comfortable in living with their adult children as they feel themselves as burden on them. This sense of humiliation makes seniors more discomfort and unhappy.
To conclude, from my perspective, both phenomenon have their own pros and cons and it all depends on the adult children either they like to live with their old parents or not. But, the advantages overweight the disadvantages as living with old and seniors, helps to convey the traditions and customs in next generation without any cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'interested'.
Suggestion: interested
... of their age fellows as they have same interest, moments of pleasure and sadness. Furth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00431034483 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72511644909 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8168062866 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431282208818 0.242375264174 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180907292492 0.0925447433944 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085138757125 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277142115667 0.151781067708 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712405523973 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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