Nowadays T.V has become an essential part of life .Medium to spread news and awareness and for some it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about it?
It is an irrefutable fact taht T.V has earned a lot of popularity in this contemporaty world . It has not only been as a medium to telecast the news and spread awareness but also been an integral part of human being's daily lives. So, I will be discussing my ideas on this topic below.
To begin with, it is obvious that television has contributed in our life in myriad ways . Firstly, we are able to watch and comprehend the current afairs from all over teh world by staying inside our home . We are kept up-to-date and it rovides us entertainment.Secondly, it provides us entertainment when we are bored and tired.T.V entertains the kids abdundantly by telesting child related programs such as cartoons and rhymes, etecetra, consequently , kids are able to learn language and good manners.Furthermore, television can be the best friend of elderly or retired person who stays at home to spend his/her quality of time after retirement. Therefore , I believe, old people are very fortunate to pass their leisure and lonely time without being bored with the help of television.
On the other hand , there are still some people who believe that t.v invites ill activities in the society and kids could be addicted to t.v.. They consider watching t.v is nothing but waste of precious time .
In a nutshell, the positive aspects outweigh the negative sides of having t.v . therefore, i strongly believe taht t.v plays an instrumental role in every moment of life in this tech-savvy era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.904 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05822550257 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.460328933 50.4703680194 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 111.454545455 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.25397266985 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942211265794 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345513942129 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573980598128 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594140662964 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529275465399 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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