Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this.
These days, it has become a growing trend for television to play a vital role in our lives. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter.
There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. the most preponderant one lies in the fact that thanks to television, people are up to date because of the news and shows which are telecast on television. Not only can television increase the knowledge of people, but television can also help in developing new ideas by watching different shows and news.
There are, however some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of television. The primary one stems from the fact that watching television regularly, people can harm their health in many different ways. For instance, if Andrew watches television daily for 5 hours, he has more chances of loosing his eye sights. Besides, in order to decrease the risk of television, people have to avoid watching television for long hours. Hence, it is apparently why many are against.
In view of the arguments outline above, one can conclude that despite some pitfalls, the benefits of topic are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...former outdo the latter. There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. the...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...iad of arguments in favor of my stance. the most preponderant one lies in the fact ...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ularly, people can harm their health in many different ways. For instance, if Andrew watches t...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesights'.
Suggestion: eyesights
...urs, he has more chances of loosing his eye sights. Besides, in order to decrease the risk...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87922705314 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56215416147 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628019323671 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6501200371 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8181818182 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0867840619612 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318629018239 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248514990959 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528685762802 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269534809038 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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