Nowdays people have to work for longer hours under stressful condition .
Do you agree or disagree?
Suggest the way by which the job condition can be improved.
In this competitive epoch, people are toiling round the clock for accomplishing success and to lead an opulent lifestyle, irrespective of any care for their health and social life, as a result, people prefer to work under a hectic and stressful working life, which is apparently an erroneous. Therefore, I completely accord with this statement and will present some measures to overcome such situation.
To begin with, temptation of success has made people to sacrifice every essential part of their life, whether it is rest or an enjoyment, consequently they are compelled to be under such stressful ambiance on account of multifarious reasons. Firstly, dearth of job opportunities has induced a fear in the mind of people due to which they prefer to work for longer hours for showing their competency at the workplace. On the top of that, employees like to work overtime due to the greed of getting promotions, higher perks and incentives which do not allow them to give time to their families and social life.
Meanwhile, this negative development can be mitigated by certain effective methods. Firstly, there should be flexible working hours for the people so that they could work as per their need, and companies should also ensure a healthy working environment for the workers, which in turn will be more effective and productive for both companies and employees. In addition, people should have proper time management for recreational activities and work, thereby they can live a good life. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that businesses which have a more comfortable and conducive atmosphere are more likely to gain profit and have dramatic success.
In conclusion, I reckon that balance between life and work is imperative to have a constant growth in life, therefore people must pay heed over it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31081081081 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32068130149 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7197558513 50.4703680194 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.666666667 104.977214359 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8888888889 20.9669160288 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.4444444444 7.25397266985 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273676719087 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112938115815 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606210504975 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155508537121 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618061923623 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 12.6369458128 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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