Online shopping is destroying local business. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping related to this statement.
Online shopping has been overwheelmed local business since some years ago and it is still eradicating them. People nowadays look for facilities, acessibilities and good prices and they will certainly find them in online shooping rather than local business.
Firstly, in online shopping we can find lots of goods. It may include clothes, shoes, etc, ranging from teenagers to adults. whereas local business is hard to find them due to lack of space. Local business do not have such huge space and, even sometimes, their location is not apt to endure such goods.
Secondly, it is faster than local business. All you have to do is picking the products that you need just with one click and pay for them with your credit card. It will not be necessary to leave the house to take those products because post officers will delivery them to you.
However, bying clothes through online shopping is not possible to try. There are some situations when we realize that what we have been bying does not suit on us. Then the online company has to retrieve us others clothes sizes.
Finally, online shopping is the worldwide way used for people to find what they want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
... etc, ranging from teenagers to adults. whereas local business is hard to find them due...
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Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... etc, ranging from teenagers to adults. whereas local business is hard to find them due...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, whereas, as to, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.795 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32055489054 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0744809719 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7692307692 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236890135205 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943105947876 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837817472326 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138250402399 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632450472573 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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