Painting and craft relaxes the mind but its understanding is not common. Discuss the ways of its promotion.
Handicrafts and painting play an important role in our life, because every person has one best quality, which is gifted from God. crafts relax our mind, but it cannot understand easily. I will discuss its advantages and promotion ways in upcoming paragraphs.
To besides with, Nowadays every person do efforts for food, shelter and clothing, thus man can also good earn with help of any craft, so that he can lead good living in any difficulty. Moreover, in this era man remains busy in all day, due to which sometime he have to face some diseases like depression, while painting and craft provide relaxation to mind. Furthermore, crafts also helpful to increase the economy of the country, for instance some paintings are kept in the museums for exhibition, therefore, people have to pay for watching the craft.
Apart from this, the promotion is very necessary for the artist, so that government should build more and more museums for exhibitions. besides this, government should provide all the facilities to the artist, like financial help. besides this, artists should get jobs related to the craft and government should also provide opportunities to bright the future.
In conclusion, it can be said that all type of crafts are beneficial from starting the world. so that people and government should contribution in the promotion of crafts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Crafts
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Suggestion: Besides
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Suggestion: Besides
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Suggestion: So
...are beneficial from starting the world. so that people and government should contr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11261261261 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66461526281 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1544640078 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.181818182 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186766191081 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793785977621 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934976162036 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115900101686 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111282039893 0.0609392437508 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.