Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s act. What is your opinion?
Recently, the phenomenon of parental responsibilities toward the children and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of parental discipline is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that high-level upbringing methods can be plus and I will scrutinize that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, responsible parents can provide the society with some noticeable effects which rooted in the fact that the merits of educated kids, as well as high-social behaviour, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed academic research which discovered parental regulating role and marvellous results at improving children’s manner. Had it not been discovery I wouldn’t have managed to do so. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both stable family relationships and successful children apparently can be seen.
On the other hand, within the realm of psychology, children’s unauthorised activities might increase the consequence of anti-social issues. Moreover, fundamental aspects of the criminal manner of children would relate to this reality that the demerits of extremely stricter fathers pertain to traditional training routines. As an example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of abhorrent results of parental response is correlated negatively with inappropriate social communications. Hence having considered such disadvantageous points it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of family strictness.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of parental legal responsibility acceptance far weigh its drawbacks, not only do the advantages of robust family and community prove the significance of high family bonds but also pinpoint long-term implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...th inappropriate social communications. Hence having considered such disadvantageous ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1207.87684729 146% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97627118644 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47583441463 2.71678728327 128% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 139.433497537 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671186440678 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 379.143842365 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8605341397 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.916666667 104.977214359 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187270130923 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06210304342 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03325719033 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106226682508 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249825599264 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 53.1260098522 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.7 11.5310837438 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.32886699507 136% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 55.0591133005 222% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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