Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s acts. What is your opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in people believing that parents should be responsible for children's acts because it would reflect their own status. There is a widespread worry that this would cause a myriad of concerns in a person's life. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and not giving time to children activities can cause a deluge of problems.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that thanks to television shows which has a great impact on the minds of a child. Not only television can lead to mind controls, but it has also affected the activities of children. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on an individual's life.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that parents are also busy with their own lifestyles and give less time to their children. This results in the fact that children remain busy with their own lives and choose their own acts accordingly without any good guidance. Hence, it is apparent that why many think that parents should be involved and fully responsible for all children's acts.
In view of arguments mentioned above, one can conclude that all the benefits of good parenting are indeed too dire to ignore by keeping a close eye on children acts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...s would cause a myriad of concerns in a persons life. In my opinion, this apprehension ...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...merits have a far-reaching impact on an individuals life. Another pivotal aspect of this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86343612335 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64620237423 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559471365639 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9161097858 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.363636364 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223033173465 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805005122948 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101934376231 0.071462118173 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126284643978 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697937930039 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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