Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, supporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead to antisocial behavior, can team sports really be good by us.
Team sports are generally regarded as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, it creates a dilemma among spectators that supporting events such as soccer matches increase violence between rival supporters and enhances antisocial behavior. But for some spectators sporting events are actually good for us. This essay will discuss why, team sports will eventually beneficial for us.
At some point in the near future, team sports will be superseding at a rapid pace. Every few years, for example, Team Sports induces good physical health and good character among indivisuals. As a result of this exponential growth, if a person plays in a team activity, he always learn to curb the hellish situation. As a result, there is no reason why team sports cannot be enhanced and adapted aong individuals.
Despite of enhancement of qualities in team sports, some people gets exaggerated with the development of team sports. Infact, they believe that team sports like soccer are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other form of antisocial behaviour. According to such people, these team sports can obsolete the good relationship among people.
Team Sports are regarded as the best way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise. While for some people it is a violent activity but for others it is a way to develop the character of a human. In my opinion, it must be promoted in order to create cordial relationship and good behaviur among people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...son plays in a team activity, he always learn to curb the hellish situation. As a res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, while, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09504132231 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72310287286 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.235615807 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0714285714 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437935183433 0.242375264174 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147786433669 0.0925447433944 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14090955536 0.071462118173 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258729231319 0.151781067708 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152892178892 0.0609392437508 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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